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Editing our literacy

Date: 16th Oct 2026 @ 2:48pm

Editing and improving our work is a key component in becoming a more rounded student and this morning during our literacy hour, we took the opportunity. 

Mr Sloan photocopied and printed out individual pieces of writing from yesterday, which had been marked and edited with a view to improvment being found in today's lesson. 

4S were up to the challenge and published their character descriptions of Hansel, one of the protangonists of our class reading focus. 

The standard of letter formation, grammar inclusion and overal sentence structure was significantly improved, which was down to the children's ability to learn and improve from small mistakes and their individual development points.

Well done everybody! Your work looks beautiful. 

Welcome to Mount Carmel RC Primary; a place where we proclaim Christ’s message of hope and celebrate the uniqueness of each child.

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Deirdre Watson - SENDCo

d.watson@mountcarmel.manchester.sch.uk

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Mount Carmel RC Primary,
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